That is a great poem. I used to writed poetry but found i am better at books and stories. Anyway, that poem really spoke to me. I see nothing wrong with it and you got your message across. Keep writing and have a great day.
Tana
You really brought out emotion in this story. I wanted to cry for the girl and all she went through and scream at her to not cut herself as if she was a real person. Great Job!!!!
Tana
wow. You have the makings of a great story. I would love to see you continue it but if you dont no worries it is great as is. Keep up the good work.
Tana
You did so well with this. I am proud that even though it took you awhile you were able to write it. It is a great way to remember your friend and the good times ya'll had. Although you may not have thought so, you were a good friend to her and she knew that. That is why she gave you that kitten. God Bless You.
Tana
Seems ironic dont it. He killed his uncle with his words and seems his words killed him. Or maybe i just dont get it. either way great story. Keep up the good work and hope to see more.
Tana
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think that says it all. Very beautifully written. I myself have depression and while reading this poem, it made me think of myself. Keep up the good work and would love to see more of your work in the future. Have a great day and keep on writing.
Tana
It was good, but i would put more supsense in it. It is creepy though and makes me think twice about staying in a motel again. Makes me wonder who might have the room next to mine. Good job and keep on writing.
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