Gonzalez, James's (purifex) Reviews

An amazing piece of work, I myself am a schizophrenic so I know the struggles, I'm actually getting put on medication next week for it.
Anyway back to your poem, It was well written and simple, the detail is moderate, and the read itself is none the less great. I hope to see more in the future!

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#4062962

Review of Little Bo Air Poops

Review by Gonzalez, James

Rated: E

| (2.5)

A cute little story, I found humor in it.

5

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#4062687

Review of The Midnight Driver

Review by Gonzalez, James

Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

A brilliant story with a great beginning, middle, and end. The characters where all great in their own way and it is a good read if your looking for chills! Keep up the good work and I cant wait to see your other works in the near future.

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#4062678

Review of Epic Translations of This World

Review by Gonzalez, James

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

This poem is a truly a great piece of work, the tone is a soothing dark that engulfs the reader into the world of the protagonist. It is a great read and I hope to see more like it in the future.

7

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#4062676

Review of Leave Me Be

Review by Gonzalez, James

Rated: 18+

| (3.0)

This poem was none the less a great one, the tone is real and it is short and sweet. The profanity gives it a feeling of realism. It also sparks a few questions, The first being is this based off of true experiences? The last being what has happened to make the protagonist this way? All in all it was a great poem to read and I hope to see more of your work in the near future.

8

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#4062675

Review of Price I Paid

Review by Gonzalez, James

Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

A very well written short story, great in detail. I protagonist was well rounded and human none the less and the situation was very real as well, I hope to see more of your works in the future.

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#4062658

Review of The End

Review by Gonzalez, James

Rated: E

| (2.5)

This is a great piece of work in the way of it being direct and to the point. It does in fact leave a lot of unanswered questions that has peeked my interest, what exactly happened to make her sad? Is this based on true events? Does she go through with and if not what does she do to cope with her life? The story was short and sweet and the swear word really adds some realism. All in all I feel you could have done more with this story, and I hope that you make more stories in the near future.