Great little story here from you. I liked the imagery from the dream, it was very vivid. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading this through. A shocking little story and was rather gripping. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought you expressed yourself very well here in this writing. I liked the tone of the words and lines. There were no errors here. I liked some of the questions you asked and the philosophy of the writing. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading these poems through. I thought they were very simple and very effective. They were also very poetic. It was hard to pick a favourite as they were both very good. I really liked the presentation and coloured font used. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the simplicity of this writing. The message was so clear and positive to me. I really liked the very last line most, it made me feel good. I liked the length of the poem, it kept the readers attention levels up high. I found no errors. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a sweet little poem. I am so glad the rock found a friend in the end. The theme was very light, original and refreshing. I haven't read a poem quite like this one before. You have a great imagination. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I truly enjoyed this classy poem from you. It was refreshing, fun and poetic. There was a so much joy in this writing. You made me smile. The structure was perfect as was the rhymes. A very enjoyable read. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. Capturing my imagination so very well. A lovely poetic power to this poem. I related so well to what you had written out. The title was a good match for the poem. I enjoyed every word. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a lovely piece of writing from you. I was particulary impressed with the mentioning of these lines from Genesis 1:1 NIV.....
"In the beginning, God created the heavens and the Earth"
Is this a prayer? I would love to read more of this Genesis 1:1 NIV. I know this was read out by the astronaughts as they circled the Earth in the Apollo missions. If you have the full prayer, I would love to read it.
I came across your writing in the random read and review selection. I thought this story was short and sweet. I wasn't sure how the story would unfold with such a good start and theme. I thought there may have been emotions running high with memories and flash backs. But the couple were more bothered by their condition over the years gone by. Good grammar and good font used here. A nice insight into these peoples lives. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A simple yet effective little piece of writing here. I liked the sweetness and imaginative feeling this gave me. A very poetic power here. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this poem from you was simple, sweet and effective to me. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. A loving message in the writing. Good imagery too. I liked the title, it drew me into the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this writing through. You made this time of year seem so much fun. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. I liked the overall feeling you gave me as I read this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked reading this writing through, it was very deep and expressive. I related well to everything you wrote out. The world is a crazy place sometimes and being alone helps us reflect and be normal. This was well written and displayed on the page. I enjoyed the read. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Both poems were very good and I enjoyed them both very much. The last line of the second poem was very inviting to me and summed the poem up very well. Nice presentation on the page. I like this form of poetry because the writer has to choose the perfect words. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a sweet little piece of writing from you. You captured the effect of Spring very well. And, yes, it is a time for love, especially as the flowers bloom and the weather warms up. Nice flowing words and lines. I enjoyed this poem very much. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought there was a mysterious last line here. The first two lines were great and I enjoyed them very much. I liked the blue font you used, looks good on the page. I like this form of poetry, it keeps the readers attention up high. An interesting read. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A well written piece of writing here. I enjoyed the philisophical tone and theme of the poem. Express it eight is a good contest but I have never entered. I enjoy all your writings that I read. Good font used too. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I truly enjoyed your writing here. A lovely take on a beautiful woman dancing. Her glory was described perfectly. A lovely poetic power over me as I read this through. A well expressed piece of writing. Great imagery too. Good work, be blessed and write on!
A nice flowing poem here from you. I liked the sentiments and the meaning. A well expressed piece of writing. I also liked the font in italic, looks good on the page. The title was simple and the poem was easy to follow and understand. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I liked the imagery that this poem gave me. I liked the warming feeling too. I also liked the font. I like this form you used but never have I used it myself. A simple yet effective piece of writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a very interesting piece of writing. I enjoyed the read through. I liked the emotions in every word and line, there was a nice feeling over me as I read this through. A clever piece of writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I loved the presentation of your poem here, it looks great on the page. A lovely, sweet little piece of writing. The title was fitting for the words and lines of this poem. Good structure and good flowing rhythm. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I couldn't agree more with what you wrote out here. I know Christmas has just passed but I did everything your writing stated. It is in the heart and the joy of coming together in family. I liked the effect of your poem here, it was sweet. Good work, be blessed and write on!
This was a lovely little prayer to read through. Prayers always feel good and satisfy the heart and soul. I enjoyed reading this through. A simple message for the reader. Soldiers are a lot braver than we realise, willing to give their lives for freedom. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I was 16 in the mid eighties and I hated all the glam rock genre. I liked the theme of your writing here, it makes a good conversation. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines and I liked the imagery coming from the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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