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I couldn't help but feel lot's of sorrow from this writing. A well written piece from you. The end seems peaceful and mature of you both not to argue. Nice story telling and was rather enjoyable. There were no distraction that I noted. Be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the theme and the meaning of this piece. A simple yet very effective item to me. The title was simple too and matched the writing well. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice and enjoyable work. Be blessed and write on!
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I really enjoyed this powerful item. Great story telling and good grammar. I loved the amount of imagination used in this story. I liked the journey I was reading. There was also good imagery from the story. A great piece of work. Be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the tone of the words and lines. There were some nice romantic lines in this item. A good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention up high. I was gripped to every word. There were no distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the romantic tone to this poem. This was written rather well. A good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention up high. The author managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I wonder who Apollo is? Good work, be blessed and write on!
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This is a very deep piece of writing. I related well to what you wrote out. I liked the title too. Your writing here somehow took the solitude away from me as I read this through. It is nice to know that I am not the only one in life. Good expressive work, be blessed and write on!
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I thought this was a very powerful item indeed. The emotions were wild and strong. My heart came alive as I read this through. I related to the writing very well. The sentiment was real and vivid to me. I felt the pain. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I thought you expressed yourself very clearly here and told the reader exactly what is wrong. Nice grammar and tone to your words and lines. The title summed it all up. There were no distractions in this writing. I hope you find what you are looking for, whatever that may be. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the read through here. There was a funny tone to the words and lines. The ending matched the prompt very well. I liked the title too. There were no distractions that I noted. The poem looks good centered on the page. Nice work, be blessed and write on!
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I felt your confusion in this matter, I felt your discomfort. I am glad you wrote about this matter and posted it here, to make others aware of what is going on. A well expressed piece of writing from you. Almost political. Be strong, be blessed and write on!
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I really enjoyed this very positive poem from you. The second stanza was my favourite, I liked the flowing rhymes and rhythm. You used the prompt very well. There were no distractions at all that I noted. Looks good centered on the page. Nice writing, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the read through. I also related quite well to everything you said. What you wrote about is my biggest fear in life, to be way too different. I liked the darkness and tone of the writing. I found this rather gripping. Great work, be blessed and write on!
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I liked the tone of the words and lines in this little item. I smiled at the meaning and mannner how you wrote this out. The title was fitting for the poem. There was a nice sentiment here. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I liked the quirky tone and theme of this writing from you. I found it kind of funny to me. The imagery was great and I also thought children would like this poem here. Nice font used, looks good on the page. Nice writing and very original. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I thought the theme was very sweet and refreshing. There were no distractions that I noted. Well written and great story telling in poetry form. I also liked the imagery that came from the words and lines. A very, very original poem here. Great writing, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the emotions in this item, they were very real and honest to me. You spilled all your feelings out onto the page very well. I hope you manage to make up with the girl in question. Maybe let her read this poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I liked the form, the form seems very difficult to me. You did a fine job here. I liked the font too. I am one of those people who is very sensitive to what I write about and post here. I related well to what you had written out here. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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A nice theme. I enjoyed the read through. The title was good for the words and lines. Nice font used too. I liked the imagery coming off the words. I also liked the very last line, it added a whole new dimension to the work. Another good item. Be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed reading this raw piece through. I liked your tone and manner in how this was expressed. The title certainly lived up to the meaning of the writing. I see this was written a long time ago. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I really enjoyed this romantic poem from you. The last line rounded the writing up very well. The last line held great imagery for the poem. A very creative piece. Great work, be blessed and write on!
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I thought you expressed yourself very well here. I liked the raw edge to the words and lines. The depth was good. The subject was dark and you spoke for many people in this work. I hope you have found a way out since posting this so long ago. This is why writing is so healthy, we can empty our minds onto the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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Great story telling, good grammar too. I enjoyed the read through. I really liked the title as well. I found this item very gripping and rewarding. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines, especially around the lamp. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed this biblical poem from you. It held a nice tone and manner. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. There were no distractions that I noted. The length was good, it keeps the readers attention high. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I had to laugh hard at the imagery from this work. I am chuckiling as I write you this review. All I could see was a manic pug, running frantically. The title was very fitting for the item. I enjoyed this very much. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I thought your writing here was very, very meaningful. There was a sense of empathy to me here. The tone and manner in how you wrote this out was impressive. I liked the theme and structure too. I enjoyed the read through. A thoughtful piece of writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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