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#4791202

Review of Snow thunder

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Nicely written and it held good imagery. Good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention. I enjoyed the read through. I enjoy all your poems. You have a good style to me. The title was direct and true to words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791199

Review of Santa lost his way

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I am glad this poem has recieved an award, it was very good to read through. Great rhythm and rhymes through out. A joy to read and digest. I enjoyed this very much. You used the prompt very well indeed. A clever piece of writing from you. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791192

Review of the rhythm of writing

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Awesome writing from you, very impressive rhythm here. I loved the theme too. This is one of the best writings I've read for a while. It had good flowing rhymes, supreme rhythm and ever better humor. I think you spoke for many writers here, poetry or stories. I truly appreciated the effort and time you put into this poem. It was great through out. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791191

Review of Love

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A good little read, comparing the different ways of loving. Nice presentation, nice font used, looks good but could be bigger (just a thought). I liked how much you managed to say in just a few lines. An inviting little poem from you. Love can be complicated and really should be simple to define. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791175

Review of The Strength of Kindness

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed reading your work through here. It was a simple yet effective poem. I liked the tone of the words and lines too. A nice, sweet little insight into your world. Kindness is free. I am kind too. I found no faults in this item. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791162

Review of A slowly dying fire...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really liked the ending here. It summed up the little tale perfectly. The gruesome fact of being alone forever was inviting and dark, twisted. I liked the imagery coming from the words and lines. You grammar was good and I enjoyed the read. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791159

Review of My Choices

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed reading into your ways of thinking. I could easily learn from you here. I know it takes hard work to always be positive and thinking well. But I know it always works out for the best if we stay positive. You are a great thinker of life and how it should be played. So, Amen to you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791155

Review of Fallen

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A simple yet effective little poem. A poem I enjoyed reading through. Good imagery came from the words and lines. I liked the last line, it summed up the writing very well. A good length for a poem too, keeping the readers attention. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791154

Review of Until the rains come

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed this poem from you, to me it was slightly biblical by the way you wrote this out. The tone was powerful and rewarding to me. I also liked the poetic sway here. I have never been to Thailand but I know it is hotter than Spain, more humid. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791152

Review of Ghost of a Chance

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed this little poem from you. The imagery was great but a little dark. I also liked the tone of the words and lines. I am guessing this was a bad dream or a thought you once had? I liked the title, it drew me in to the writing. A good worthwhile read. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791151

Review of Backward Dizzy Dallying

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I laughed as I read this through. Great theme and very funny. You put a smile on my face. Nice presentation, centered on the page. Looks good to me. The title said it all. You said in the brief description, you just started writing? I have done that before and had no idea where the writing was going. But your poem here is funnier than mine. I enjoyed the dizzy read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791150

Review of Winter Storm Landon 2-2-22

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Reading this through made me feel really cold, the words and lines were in great detail. The theme was fitting for this time of year. I liked the last stanza, it was warming and real. The imagery was good. I could see the snow covered branches with no birds chirping on them. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791004

Review of your original scar

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I found this theme to be very serious indeed. I am not sure what truly happened here but there was high emotion in this poem. The tone was expressive and I felt some heart too. A mothers story no doubt. You kept the writing short, keeping the readers attention. A worrying item. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791002

Review of Sundial

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I thought this was a great little poem from you. The rhymes were great, the rhythm was great too. I liked the flowing feel to the words and lines. A good theme for a poem and the title was inviting to me. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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#4791001

Review of My mother !

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was a very emotional piece of writing to me. I loved the line where you said to be born again. This was a nice touch and resonated well with me. A painful and heart aching poem from you. I found no way to improve the item. It was great. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790999

Review of I Miss You Papa

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Aww. I thought this was a heart aching poem from you. I am sorry for your loss here. Nice expressions and good word choices. The pain is evident here. I pray for you all there. Nice presentation on the page. A very powerful poem indeed. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790997

Review of SHADOWS OF BETRAYAL

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed reading this work through. It was very well written and displayed on the page. The tone of the words and lines was of war and conflict. The rhythm was good as were the rhymes. I found no way to improve the item, it is fine the way it is. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790996

Review of Because

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| (5.0)

I liked reading this through with pace. It held good rhythm. The theme was good and inviting. Certainly a business person would relate to this writing. Someone very busy. I enjoyed the philosophy here. Good presentation and looks good on the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790993

Review of Into The Woodland

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I thought this was a beautiful piece of writing from you. Great font used, looks good on the page. I was transported to another world as I read this through. The title drew me in and didn't let me down. I really enjoyed the fantasy here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790992

Review of Meditation

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I think you opened up an interesting point here. The art of concentration, concentrating on one thing, like the basketball player who was indeed meditating but not sitting legs folded under a tree and humming. After reading this through, I realised I am therefor meditating often without knowing. Like when I am reviewing, I only focus on the writing and my opinion. Many will associate meditating with spirituality, Like Buddha. Nice point made here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790990

Review of It Was...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I liked the female in this short story, she had a lot of empathy for him. A good amount of vision in this writing. I enjoyed reading this through. The grammar was good and the flowing tale was inviting. I thought for a moment this was going to turn into erotica, it stayed clean. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790989

Review of The Midway Beckons

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed reading your poem through very much. I liked the comic font you used. I also liked the positivity of this piece. Good imagery came from the words and lines. A kind of fun poem with a light heart. I liked the very last line, it gave the whole poem good shape and meaning. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790988

Review of Platonic Love

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I thought this was a very good piece of writing. I loved the honest tone to the words and lines. A deep, sensitive poem. I really enjoyed the read through. I also think you spoke for many other people. Love and life is the same for everyone, it's just that some are more lucky than others. Well expressed, good work and write on!

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#4790986

Review of Starry Night

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Nice font used here and I liked how it looked on the page. A good theme and a little inspiring. There was originality of this poem from you. I enjoyed reading this through. I also liked the imagery. A good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention up. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4790985

Review of Dreams

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| (5.0)

I liked the depth of this dark item. I wonder why you wrote such a gruesome piece? Gruesome as in the dark, twisted details. The title was simple and inviting. Dreams often make good writing. I liked the simplicity of this form. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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