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Review of My teacher  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was rather quite good for the age you were when you wrote this out. A nice accolade for the woman in question. I like when people post their earliest works, it proves that words are timeless and poetry never changes. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Ideas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Try this:

The beginning of time, write out your thoughts on the beginning of space and time as you percieve it. Do it essay style, we all have our ideas on this subject, some relate to God as the creator of time, some say a higher power or entity. If you go to my portfolio and then scroll down to "Works without reviews" and click on "The Shamen, Re-Evolution" you will find my favorite piece on this subject. Or, if you're really clever you could write it in poetry form. Get inspired!

I hope this helped.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this gripping piece from you. The theme was great and rewarding. There were no distractions at all. A great take on the meaning of love, well expressed and well explained. I liked the tone and manner of your writing here. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the theme of this writing here. This little woman in question sounds awesome to me. There was a an emotional power to this poem. I know this was written a few years ago and I hope all is ok with Marissa. A fulfilling poem here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Lexical  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing came up in the random read and review page.

I had to look in the dictionary to know what lexical meant. (lol). You did a fine job in using just 24 syllables, I know this is not easy. Your character here sounds intelligent. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Mark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this writing through. The philosophy here was good and made the tone of the words seem alive. You made me feel lucky that I dont suffer from this condition. An interesting read and was well expressed. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Aww. Nicely expressed writing. The combination of time and love was great. The title was perfect and suited your writing very well. I wish you luck in this subject and matter. There was a lovely sense of philosophy in this poem from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The little man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poetry here from you. The rhymes and rhythm were great. I enjoyed the read through. There were no distractions at all. I liked the imagery from this writing. This reminded me of a Pink Floyd song from years ago. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Rain Reveries  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was very creative in the last few lines. The whole poem was great and I enjoyed every word you wrote out. There were no distractions at all. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice imagery too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this writing from you here. You set the scene very well. I also liked the romantic theme and the atmosphere to the words and lines. There was a good tone to this writing. Nicely written, no distractions at all. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Cliff  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked the mysterious feeling this writing gave me as I read this through. It is a quirky little poem to me. I liked the overall feel to the words and lines. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I like your writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You expressed yourself very well here and I liked the depth of the words and lines. The meaning was real and I related well to what you had written out. Again, you said so much in just a few lines. You are an interesting writer/poet. Good work, be blessed. Write on!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought this writing from you was short and direct. I read at pace to get the feel of the flow. It is a good poem. I liked the theme, you simplified the subject very well. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Great, great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Building Castles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I really loved the tone and manner of the words and lines. The last two lines were great, they really rounded the writing off perfectly. There was also great imagery coming from this work. Good presentation, looks good centered on the page and nice comic font. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Stars  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading the footnotes at the bottom of the page. It made your poem more correct. I am fascinated by what I read at the bottom about the stars. I am a Taurus by sign. I cant believe the stars were first seen B.C. This is so long ago. Amazing work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of WRITER'S BLOCK  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading a little bit about you at this time. I liked your grammar here. A worthwile read to me. It is anoying when we cant creat an item to write. I hope you find some stability to keep writing. There were no distractions in this item. Good work, well expressed. Write on!

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Review of Cupid Outbid  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed the read through. Great presentation here, looks good on the page. I wasn't expecting love to be turned away in this acrostic. A different poem to what I am used to on here. I liked the tone and manner in the way this was written out. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A lovely expressive tone to your words and lines here. I truly enjoyed every word you wrote out. The romantic power was great and inviting. You said so much in just a few lines. I liked the title too. There were no distractions in this work from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the raw emotions of this writing and situation here. You wrote this out very well. The meaning was sad yet powerful. The title was perfect for the words and lines. This is a very expressive piece of writing and one I shall remember for the raw feelings you shared. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Primal Sense  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved the tone of this poem. The writing was very poetic. You painted a lovely picture with your words here. I also liked the structure of the poem. I enjoyed every word and line. There were no distractions in this poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Overload  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought you described this condition very well. I liked the tone of the words and lines. Nicely presented, centered on the page, looks good to me. I like how you ended the poem with one line. This summed up the meaning very well. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good first poem from you here. There were no distractions. The flow was good, the rhythm was good, everything was fine. I am stuck in giving this a title. I enjoyed reading through your thoughts at this moment. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great writing here. Perfectly executed. There were no distractions at all. Nice rhymes, nice flow. I enjoyed every word and line you wrote out. A true gem of a poem. The theme was beaufitul and very poetic. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Ladybug  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great presentation, centered on the page, looks good to me. Nice structure to the writing here. There were no distractions in this poem. I enjoyed the read through, I also enjoyed the theme. A nice, sweet little item. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of My Turn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very different poem to what I am used to here. I liked the swearing, it helped get the message across to the reader. A well executed poem. There were no distractions that I noted. Revenge is sweet. You expressed yourself very clearly here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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