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Rated: E | (4.0)
hi debbie,
I am like your husband now.
I feel the same as he does for a brother. The only difference is that I've never seen my brother since birth but I can feel his presence through his voice on the phone.

I can relate most especially in the line "I'm saddened by the time we waste"...
But I think its more appropriate if you use "wasted rather than waste" because you are already talking about the past time.

more power to you Debbie and write on.
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