Just finish reading first two chapters. As a wise person once said, if you are not interested in a book in the first pages then just drop it but in this case it's totally the opposite. Even though it's not the kind of genre that I would pick up to read I found this first two chapters very engaging. Sincerely enjoying reading it. I will be leaving the rating to the end of the book.
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Very emotionally charged and engaging work.
Thumbs up: "That makes I selfish to place fear upon the weakened shelf of others hearts. But my hearts says otherwise. So why run from me for mere words that no intention to bare your fears. But to free you of your own inflictions so you may sleep."
Really enjoyed it! Very well conceived. I Like the way you increase the size of each line according to the action that is unfolding. Really brilliant concept!
In this celestial dance, expanding across time and space = really nice choice of words Thumbs up!
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