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7 Public Reviews Given
7 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I offer praise when it is truly deserved and advice when it truly wanted.
I'm good at...
I am good reading passed the fluff in order to abstract the intent.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, and Speculative Fiction
Least Favorite Genres
Romance, Sappy chick lit
Favorite Item Types
Contest Entries
Least Favorite Item Types
I have not found one yet
I will not review...
Erotica, Poetry, or Autobiographical Stories
Public Reviews
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Review by Improxablity Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your writing caught me by surprise. I am truly moved by the depth of emotion you conveyed with so few words. You have a real gift for expressing deep feelings. Feelings that some of experience yet can not name much less be able to express them as you have done so very well here.

That being said I wish that I had more context. I want to understand who it is that you are writing to at the beginning and what lead up to letter to your beloved. Knowing these could give the reader more connection thus having a deeper impact on them.

I look forward to reading more of your writing and want you to know that you are very gifted.


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Review by Improxablity Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love a good riddle as much as I love a little twist at the end of a story and this had both. Since this was a dialogue only story the reader is having to make up the voice of the characters instead being told by the writer.So without the descriptive detail of narration, the read is left with only the manner in which each character speaks. I think that if the characters had more of a unique tone then it could have become even more entertaining.


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Review by Improxablity Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I liked the relaxed conversational tone of the narrator even despite being was annoying she was light and entertaining throughout. I also enjoyed the clever reversal of moving out of a big city due to noise pollution into leaving the countryside to seek peace in the city. The only thing I could think that would make it better would be expounding on her revenge plots.


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