You know you have a talent. I sense the emotion in the poem. I enjoyed it very much. For me it has no flaws. Enhance your talent. You are great at capturing the moment, the feeling. Always remember that in this world, there is never anything that you cannot work on to improve. Continue writing and sharpening your skills.
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/prodigy
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.10 seconds at 12:30am on Nov 24, 2024 via server WEBX2.