I like this poem, the description that you have incorporated into this poem gives a lot of insight into what people may have thought was a normal walk through the woods. The description explains how you see the word and such so it lets the reader know a little bit about you too. Keep up the good writing!
I really like this poem and how it conveys a story within. All poetry has a story within but this does a good job describing the feeling of once having "her." I also like the free-verse of this poem and how it just flows naturally. It shows that a poem doesn't need form or a rhyming scheme to make sense. Keep up the good writing!
I like this poem, the description of how the child's imagination is is so vivid and it draws a very good visual for the reader. I also enjoy how the poem is in free-verse. I like how the kid has a very simple imagination, you put so much detail into what people usually think is going through a child's imagination and mind. It can either be complex or simple and you really touch base on that. Keep up the good writing!
I really like this poem. The emotion that only 39 lines can get across is amazing. I like the form of free-verse that you have presented in this poem also. Some of the readers will really be able to connect to what you are saying and then there are others who will not be able to relate at all, either way the poem is a very well written one. Keep up the good writing!
I like this poem. I really like how it is so short but it gives a lot of insight. Depending on what the reader has been through or is going through reflects how the reader will read this particular poem. It all depends on the view of the reader and that is what I like most about this poem. Keep up the good writing!
I like the meaning behind the poem and the way it is written in one verse. You may want to look at the spelling in the poem and you may want to look at the order in which some of your words lie. For example, " without the suns power to life give" you may want to change it to "without the suns power to give life." Other than those few things, you should be good to go! Keep up the good writing!
I really like this poem and how you explained that the poem had a special meaning and it was based on a true story. I also like the description that you have presented us in this poem because it gives the reader a better visual on what is happening in the situation. It also explains very well how you think the crow had gotten out in the true story. Keep up the good writing!
I really like the introduction to this story, I will be keeping up with the novel and how its progresses. I think you have a very good understanding and ideas that you will interpret into this story. I also like the suspense of not knowing what had happened and what will happen. Keep up the good writing!
I really like this story. Unlike the predictable stories the end of this story has a plot twist. As a reader I expected the story to end happy and the kid to be worrying about nothing, it turned out the exact opposite. I wouldn't change anything you did with this story, it was very well written and the plot twists were good. I do suggest you write sequels to this because it would be a very good series of short stories. Keep up the good writing!
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