Davis this was amazing. Your word choice was amazing and the twist was very much loved! I loved it keep doing what your doing! I BET YOU WONT FIGHT ME DOE!!! j/k!!!
This poem was amazing. You had some amazing imagery in this. I think it couldve been better with out all the lines after Im broken and lost. If you wouldve said Im broken and lost it wouldve left me wondering. But other then that good. Great thought!
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