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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow. Well done. I lost the one I know I was meant for January 1 2007. So this it's home
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Review of My Final Good-bye  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very heartfelt and heart breaking.around that time I was missing someone from 2006. 3 years and still pain felt fresh.
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Review of Who am I  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Heartfelt questions. Left for the reader to answer.
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Review of "Sweet November"  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful. I have my own sweet November memory as well. Holding that person and feeling love and unity.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem. Full of emotion. Tells it very quickly how easily it is to losee someone and never understand why.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is so true. Amazing clarity in describing this madness that happens in a break up. Went through one myself many years ago that left me broken for years. Than the next good relationship I had I treated her like she wasn't important and than made her leave even though I did love her. It was unfair for her for me to unintentionally break her like I was broken. Listen to a song called pain killers by Bryan Fallon.
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Review of Lustful Judo  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this. It moves like water. I enjoyed your first poem as well. Keeps writing.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great heartfelt poem. I understand loss of this magnitude. It is a breaker of the soul. Beautiful and we'll written.
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Review of Evening Magic  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very good. Imagery is very well done. Great quick read.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Really like the images of this poem. I like how the seeds qe plant turn into flowers for people to pluck.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Powerful imagery. I really enjoyed this. It does show pain that can only be written about like this after going through it. This isn't something people can pretend to know. Great job with it.
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Review of Reality  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
i really like this. Very powerful.
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Review of All That Was Lost  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is fantastic. I too have gone through something similar. In a literal hour my life changed. I use poetry to expel the demons and you should keep at it. You have a way with words and hopefully it will help in the long run.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice. Invokes many thoughts about struggling with inner turmoil and loss. I really enjoyed this.
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Review of Outside  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good. I like the imagry. Let's me see a clear picture of loss.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Deeply beautiful. Loss due to circumstance and choices made. Love concurs all excpet pride. Written with love and sorrow. Which tend to be linked like hearts in this.
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Review of Soulmate Gone  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful. Shows the love and it seems that something happened to hurt the other wirhout meaning too. Which we all do. This told a story that I feel deeply. I miss my soul mate daily. With a pain I cannot express in words deep enough. God bless. I hope that happiness in its strongest form can reach you.
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Review of Can You See  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. Loved it. Hits home with me. And the words used to convey the pain and hidden part of you is amazing.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really liked this. Struck my heart deeply. Vivid and emotional.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written. Full of experience that defines a person.
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Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem really hits home for me. Love lost and replaced. Though the replacement offered something more it sadly does not live up to the task. Beautiful.
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Review of Impurities  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Power imagery. Feels like a love of your past you are forced to watch as she is with someone who you feel is not good enough. I like it and can relate.
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Review of Fey  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great story. Addiction is a horrible thing to deal with. I can relate.
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Review of On the edge  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this. It reminds me of a similar situation from my past. Myvpoems reflect this same feeling a lot of the time.
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Review of Sacred Song  Open in new Window.
Review by William T Paine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple and elegant. You write so candid about death and the stone that marks our last bed. That is the interpretation I held.

It flows. It has impact. Reminds us through the shortness of your words how fleeting life can be, and while fleeting or short large impacts can be made. Well done.
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