Its not too hard but for those who do not know about Spiderman may miss a few. The hardest is the symbiote one. You could have put one in about Kraven the Hunter or the Black Cat. Overall it was enjoyable and a fun time killer.
Very dark and brooding. Yet it is very well written. I like your contrast between the kids playing and the man sitting on the side of the road. Also, I like how the location does not matter. Yes we know what they look like and what their jobs are to have an idea where they live, but ultimately location is not part of the story. Well done.
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