I'm new to writing here and I guess this is my first review. I found this story really quite moving. For me, it tells of a desire in most folks heart to be kind and do something a little extra. A good engaging story gives a mind picture and this happend for me. The use of simple language helps the story to be engaging too. I don't think I am experience enough at this stage to offer suggestions. To attempt that would not be honest of me. Thank you for a heart warming story.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/potatoehead64
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.07 seconds at 6:58pm on Nov 12, 2024 via server WEBX1.