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Review of Jillian's Gift  
Review by potatoehead64
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm new to writing here and I guess this is my first review. I found this story really quite moving. For me, it tells of a desire in most folks heart to be kind and do something a little extra. A good engaging story gives a mind picture and this happend for me. The use of simple language helps the story to be engaging too. I don't think I am experience enough at this stage to offer suggestions. To attempt that would not be honest of me. Thank you for a heart warming story.
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