Longing, forlorn, something enjoyed but the human nature of needing to have that same feeling over and over - never losing it.
I have always been interested in lost love, misunderstood emotions, assumptions and people turning away. doors closing in the mind and therefore their hearts.
This piece is what I call a "Worded Image".
You are gifted in word imagery - something that technically is a science more than an art. because the ability to word a scene, an image using words that best DESCRIBE as well as EMOTE are near impossible, never mind in such short verses.
I say well done, and thank you - keep painting images with your words.
I think I am biased here, but I REALLY enjoyed your piece! Biased because it speaks to me on a level where something is broken but beautifully; and demands respect and almost praise for that reason.
I would like to see more longer items from you, so please keep up the creativeness.
well done.
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