Very encouraging, I liked how you did this piece of writing, but is it this small or is that my kindle, for this is my first time writing a review with it. Anyway, it is nice that you tried to teach people with this bit of writing. I enjoyed it.
Very nice. About a young child and how he was grounded, and what he did after he was grounded. I like the grandfather. He seems very nice. I enjoyed this bit of writing and will be looking for anymore of these little bits of writing. I enjoy writing from the heart, and while this is not writing from the heart, I still enjoyed it.
*sniff sniff*
very heartfelt, I am sure that many readers out there felt the pain and sorrow that you had to get off of your chest by making this. It was a beautiful free verse poem and I was in tears at the end. Like you, I also lost someone. I lost my grandmother. This poem made me think of her, and everyone else that I knew who had died.
very nice. love the way that you keep the picture on the top going with the poem. It makes me feel like I am being pushed to and fro, like waves. I like it very much, please make more poems of nature, like try doing a tree in seasons, losing leaves and growing leaves and flowers and blooming. Or a deer, how it lives and bounds through the woods and mates and has children.
Dear Sir/Miss/or any other,
I enjoyed this poem for many reasons. I would rather not list them, but I believe that even a simple comment saying that I enjoyed it is good enough.
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