This made me pause and think. And I read it it a second time just to verify my feelings. It was a little scary because it is so thought provoking that it makes one self reflect. Great piece of writing.
Wow, this totally sent me on a visual voyage. I could see the dark cloaked visitor in my minds eye. Here the hissing of its voice. The pain an coldnes over my body as i read on. It was a great piece of work. One that I will remember. And this writing will inspire my own works. Thank you.
I found this very gripping,as it reminded me of a friend from the past. The flow was even and it kept me looking for the next line.I could feel what you were feeling and hear what you heard. It was mellow and touching. It made think of losses iI suffered but one day regain again. Beautiful.
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