Hi smafas, I'm poohbear I read this story "Shrunk into his hands" and wanted to give you my opinion on it. I don't do many reviews, but when I read your item, I couldn't help but say to myself, "that is so creative, and imaginative." I could never come up with something so over the top as this. you did a good job. I can't make any corrections because I don't do that sort of thing, but I didn't see any mistakes.
you did a good job and thanks fo sharing.
this is a beautiful poem about an orchard. I love nature poems and I especially liked this one, you did an excellent job creating it. It is original and creative, a very pretty sounding poem. The title is also very excellent and the descriptions are outstanding. trees are always a good thing to write about.
this is a story about wet roadways and possible car accidents due to speeding and being distracted while driving on the wet roads. this reads like an article sort of. It really don't seem much like a poem to me. but I guess it is. kind of an essay about cars on wet roads. you did a good job though.
This is an awesome poem about spirituality in our society. I think you really did a fine job with this poem. It is well worded and well written. I found it to be creative and original. You wrote it in an odd structure, I wonder if it might not be better written in quatrains.
This was aN INTERESTING topic and I enjoyed reading it. I would love to learn how to write better.,I'm forever making mistakes and I dont't know how to form a good poem. I think you are very well educated and you write so well.
hi Sagacious_T, I am here today to give you a simply positive read and review of your Item," Today I am Armed."
This is a dramatic piece, which I found to be quite thought provoking and origional, I enjoyed the second half the best when The person was able to stand up for themself.
keep up the good work and write on!
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hi Sammie-chan, I am going to rate "Fantastical Fairytale" for you this day.
First of all I found the background of the story to be very pleasant to read, a good concept for a madlib. The little story was entertaining and easy to follow.
this was a fun exercise. my story turned out cool just a little strange but cute.
keep up the good work and write on!
you have written a simple message which tells a complete story.
I found it to be pleasureable reading. the thing I liked most about the poem is how it is gender neutral and could be written for any one mother ,brother, lover, etc.
this poem spoke to me on an emotional level. you have done a good job.
write on!
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