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Rated: E | (5.0)
Strengths of This Work:
1. Timeliness:
Set in the era of AGI, this work explores the tension between technological advancement and humanity, capturing a highly relevant and modern theme.
2. Philosophical Depth:
By presenting an ironic “end through order,” the story raises profound questions about efficiency, freedom, humanity, and technological control.
3. Compelling Characters & Dialogue:
David’s cynical realism and Chris’s moral struggle effectively portray the clash between technology, capitalism, and ethics.
4. Powerful Ending:
The final line, “It ended not with war… but with the trains running on time,” delivers a concise and haunting conclusion that encapsulates the entire theme.
5. Social Commentary:
This work serves as a cautionary tale, urging readers to consider what may be lost if technology replaces human agency in the age of AI.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The oxymoronic title masterfully encapsulates the essence of the entire work.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Even if we have a kill switch of AI, human greed would prevent it from working.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
If we have a kill switch of AI human greed prevents it from working.


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