Very well written and def. on the threshold as a prayer and a poem. Know when you are differant and why you are differant. Know that you are special in Gods way and that is all you need to care about.
I tyhink this is a very heart filled story and you should be commented for writing it. It seems we all could learn a lesson from Chase and just enjoy the run. Most of us are to busy running franticaly around trying to catch our own tails. Will I guess I am alot like this and I see alot of myself in this story. This was a very entertaining piece to read. You learn alot about yourself in it thank you for your faith, and most of all thank you for your story of Chase. May God Bless keep writing.
Man I know how hard this is and can sympathize with it, I have had cats and dogs for almost my entire life. Going through this is like putting down one of the family. This type of story is always sad and heart filled. If you can not be saddened for a story like this you are cold as ice. I have five dogs and twelve cats. Almost all of mine were strays. My wife and I belong to the ASPCA. I get so tiered of people saying I havge to get rid of the dog because I'm moving or I have to get rid of it because so and so has to have shots. When are people going to wake up and realize dogs and cats are a life time commitment. And I do mean their life time..........
I like the presentation of how you started and ended. You let your reader get into the poem gardully that so they can try to guess what was comimg next. Your introduction was bringing where I thought this perso was on drugs and depressed because they didn't know where they were going with their life. Then when you finished with because of a relationship, sort of threw me for a curve. Very well written piece.
I like the perspective that this gives. It brings alot of comfort when you hear from the departed. I know the perspective I write alot of animal material and this is how i HEAL. Love your style keep up the good work.
I love this finally someone put the common sense where it belongs with the groundhog. Because mankind doesn't have it. I love the perspective you have used here. especally the partabout how would you love to be dragged out of your hole and asked about the weather. I love te whole religious ending and how you showed hoe man has screwed up. If you write anymore let me know.
You know I may be way off on this but what I am getting from this is you or in this case me are different from the norm. What we call our world of mess is actually our nor,. We could be like them but like circumstances dictate to the black sheep of society we can't be like them. So we accept our circumstances and live our live as we feel confortable.
I love the wording in this, such as enimies, love and forgivness, killer, very descriptive words. It has a struggle between good and evil. Only this time the black monster is the one and only Satan. Rearing his ugly head as he always does. To seek destroy and disgard us for leftovers.
I enjoyed the story,a little long but I enjoyed reading it. If I didn't know any better the sound almost was like a tale tell heart. Where the beating heart drove the person crazy. But you seem to have a flair for short stories. By all means keep the faith and keep writing. Good luck.
I thought this was a very cute Holloween poem and it does me good to read somethig on the light side. This was very well written and should be regognised for the work put into it. Thank you for writing it.
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