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Review of Hawaiian Breeze  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
Your readers might enjoy why you like the scent, what it reminds you of, smells like?
I feel like this poem is empty praise of a product I am not honestly sure you even like. So, there is that. I am not sure how to develop the change that would make this great. The poem is listed as free verse but it seems like you were going for a very specific format style which causes some of the repetition that leaves me questioning the extravegance and delight of Hawaiian Breeze.
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