This SUCH a cute poem Mark...I so enjoyed the marvellous candor and jovial accord...you have painted a most enjoyed scene here...great work!...miles...tk u for shairng...xoxo...B
Oh this poem is chock-full of loveliness sublime...tender and sweet, with just enough bliss to last and eternity...tk u for sharing such beauty and joy!...xoxo..B
Lovely, lovely cadence and accord! A truly stunning display of eethereal verbiage both astounding and resounding in verse and metaphor...tk u for sharing..a true delight to read and inhale all its true beauty...oxxoo..blessings...B
Wow...one most poignant and profound read indeed, I was raised in a small farming town in New Jersey which behold many unforeseen mishaps and hidden crimes back in the 60's era. I recently found out this town flourished on prostitution with many neighboring fathers and transient female visitors, a wet town still to t his day though now flourishing with gangs and drugs..I pity the people who let these type of hideous events flourish for their own profit and gain..tk u for sharing..B
For this little boys bares the desire to have fun in a place once filled with entertainment and laughter, tho' now long gone and the memory lives forever...an excellent display of your unique talents with prolific verse penned to perfection....tk u for sharing...B
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