I got tears in my eyes while reading this. I think anyone who has lost someone very close to them can feel the connection with this poem. Thank you for sharing it with others. I think you have a gift for telling a story through poetry. Keep up the good work. Always, Loveofodes
I really found this poem mystically enthralling. I enjoy the spin. You use words and phrases in such a wonderful way that it leaves one wanting to hear/read more. I hope you'll write more like this for me to read. I enjoyed it alot. In titling this poem, you should take in to account what you are trying to convey, whether it is personal or general. You see, as a reader, I could interpret it differently from what you, as the writer would. So, you should title it from your perspective not from a readers. All that aside, I can offer "Weary" as title, from my perspective. Good luck! Thanks for sharing. poetbuff
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