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Rated: E | (3.5)
I appreciated your observation about how people so thoroughly ignore others talking to themselves on public transport. I've seen it a lot and I'm always curious about why it happens. I like how this reads like your average journal entry with a bit of poetry sprinkled between the recitations of routine. The closing line was my favorite I think, great little bow on top. Good work!
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