I too love our Savior, and love your message about giving Him the respect on His day. We need to remember the Rejoycing part of honoring Him. Your poem emphesized that in a clear and concise way. It lifted me. I like the rythm of your piece.
What a lovely story of loyalty and love. As my mother and I get closer to the moment of decision, the stories of courage capture my attention and aspiration. I felt the fatigue and despair as he continued to care for his wife in her illness. And I gasped as I realized his age. Thanks for sharing such a warm story.
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