This funny and I think you achieved the tongue-in-cheek tone you were going for. While my personal style would not be to write an author bio like this, I think it is funny and cute. I wonder if it doesn't border on too much though since every single thing or person has some sort of odd joke to it. I would look into author bios written by Jenny Lawson AKA The Blogess. She hits that sweet spot in the middle of odd, cute, funny and real. Good luck!
I really like this! It shows how much power any one thing can have if you allow it to. Power to break you or make you and power to control your emotions. I am always telling my teens that they can't give another person enough power to control their emotions and the same holds true for objects. great job!
This is Very cute! I have a seven year old daughter currently so I know how crazy their little crushes can be. I liked how you portrayed their complex and fast-changing emotions and showed how hard it can be for a young child to understand. I think the most amazing part is showing how easily affected these young kids are by each other’s opinions and feelings
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