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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I liked this short work. It's a sad place to be. It really made me feel sorry for the woman. I wasn't really sure where they were but assumed it was his bedroom. And it smelled bad.
I like how you really go into your descriptions and metaphores. Keep up the very good work :)
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