I commend Paulus for the story about the success of Lee Jun Ki. He clearly brings out the qualities that made the actor successful. He describes these qualities as:
1. the focus on personal goals;
2. maintaining one's own natural appearance in a role that required Lee Jun Ki to undergo cosmetic surgery.
The article also highlights another quality. This quality is risk-taking. Lee Jun Ki took the risk to play out unpopular role that was taboo to the society in which he lived. Paradoxically, this is the role that made him successful.
The story is very interesting and quite easy to read and understand. The qualities about success highlighted in the story are universal in any area oh human endeavour. Paulus reminds the reader about these universal qualities. I am very inspired by this approach to writing.
However, Paulus may wish to work very hard to improve his grammar so that his works become very exciting.
Grammar is mustered by reading extensively works of other writers where English is the first language.
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