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Review of ABANDONED  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow I am so sorry for the baby. Your poem was vivid and you could really express the different parts of this piece. I might be wrong but I don't think that you can spell baby with an e instead of an y. But everything else was really good You should keep on writing and don't stop believing!
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Review of I Was Falling  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
You should write more! i was so capture in this book, the details were so cool I could imagine Death. It was tragic how that girl dies but it was cool on where she goes to! This is a really good book and really should have more it was so suspenseful lol thanks for writing it!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You did a great job writing this poem when I read it I can picture everything that you are describing and it is wonderful. Your choice of words are superb and your descriptions are to die for! I enjoyed reading his poem, thanks!
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Review of Touch of Magic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, the way you described the place she was in, the way she looked like, the sounds that were in the air, it was like I was actually there! This was a really cool contest entry and I really enjoyed reading it, It was interesting how you added these characters to fit in with the story.
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Review of Insomnia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it, and I also like that you added a little thing at the bottom of the poem describing what meant what. Well, your format, spelling, grammar, and background research is on the top of my cool list. I also appreciate that you wrote this poem to be sad, which is not to much in most poems I read. Thank you for letting me review this piece and good bye
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Review of CHAPTERS  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I am here to review chapters byGiggles the Poet Author IconMail Icon I think that this poem has really stuck out to me and my life. I love what the poem is all about and how the poem is written, even the spelling and grammar.thank you for the time to read my review thank you and bye.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I am here to review this very great piece of poetry. I have no problems with it and would like to say that this is one of the best poems I have ever read. I appreciate the time you spent on writing this poem and getting all of the spelling and grammar right on it.thank you and bye.
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Review of WHISPERS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I am here to review this amazing piece of poetry. I think that your format was perfect for the thing you choose, i also like how you paid attention to the spelling and grammar.Thank you for your inspiring poem, which has inspired me to be a better writer, thank you and bye.
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, i am reviewing this wonderful, fantastic, amazing poem! I loved this poem, I loved the poem format, spelling, and grammar.The part of the poem I loved most was:"Love will take the place of fear." Because it just touches my heart and that is why I love it
I appreciate the time and the effort that you put into this poem, and how much it must have meant for you to write.thank you for letting me review this and have a nice day
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Review of Austin Parks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello, I have really no suggestions to add to this story, But I also hate how his father abused him, that's good (for the story not the boy), I think you have a great begging to a story and hope the ending is a good as the begging turned out to be. I think that all of your spelling and grammar look to be okay, as with your format. thanks bye.
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Review of Flowers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I found the short story on a random review and I just wanted to say that i liked many things about this story but what stuck out to me was the comparison of her to the flower it was amazing at how much detail and everything else to make it so real like she was the smae thing as the flower. It was a sad story and I think that people are going to read it well, bye have a nice week. Keep writing ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


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Review of Changing Fate  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, this story has everything a person would want to read, it even has suspense in the end of it all. Who knows what will happen to emma as she starts her adventure to change the fate that was given to her. You did a good job with the spelling and everything else in this story. I am, glad to have reviewed this, bye
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Review of When I am no more  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, I am here to review this perfectly detailed story. I thought that this story showed at lot of detail and a good rhyme scheme

What I liked about it: I liked the way you described heaven and hell in great things about both.

What I would change: (why do I keep putting these here for no reason) you poem is perfect

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, I am reviewing this incredible story for you. Here we go:

What I liked about the story: I liked the part where Sarah tried to explain everything to her husband when he was packing frantically.

What I would change: well, I don't think that you should change anything it looks okay to me

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Review of Game of Thrones  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello I am going to review this wonderful contest. I have entered, and so far i love it. It has how to and the total gift points for each group. It is like organizational heaven. I think that this is going to be a huge success. thank you for letting me review this and have a nice day.
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Review of For My Valentine  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey I wanted to say that this is one of the most romantic poems I have read( that is in a statistic item like this) And wanted to say that this is like a master poet wrote it, yes it is that good.I found this on a random review and wanted to say bye.
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Review of Spring Spirit  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
You know what I think that you met your best goal with this one( if you had a goal that is)
I found this on a random review and wanted to like praise you for it(not really praise but thank you)
I loved it and hope your other readers do to thank you bye


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
hi I found this on a random review and wanted to say that this story is awesome i could not stop reading it. The part I liked most was:" “Um no; of course not.” I forced a nervous smile and was afraid he might kill me and put my own body with the other. I was not sure if such a thing was plausible but I was still in a great deal of shock." ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


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Review of Purple Tie  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi I found this on a random review and wanted to say that I simply loved it, thanks for the wonderful story and i wish you the best of luck
I like the details, the spelling, and the grammar.Thank you for reading this and possible responding to it well, bye


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, I have found this wonderful poem and wanted to review it. I liked the poem, spelling, grammar, and formate of the poem. I also like the first few lines in the poem, they made me hungry especially this part:" I can smell the coffee in the shiny stainless urns. and oatmeal, grits, sausage patties and eggs, yummy well, bye.


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Review of Red Dog  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
No offence but this would make like a great children s story.Hi, I found this on a randome review and wanted to say that this is a great poem and i enjoyed reading it, I like how you boled words and everything.Well, Bye
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found this on a random review and would just like to say, Thank you for writing this piece I think that it was genus for you to because that is a question that most people have and it takes them time to know the answer.keep on writing
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, I found this on a random review and wanted to comment on what you have written. I like the format, spelling, grammar, and everything else in your poem i liked the part where you said:An endless horizon ahead, I do feel.

In these withered sands of fear and pain

A sense of belongingness I now gain. Bye.


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Review of Hold me  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a romantic poem And the funny thing is, it is just that I don't like romantic things of that sort.Well, I found this on a random review and wanted to say that every word was worth reading. My favorite line was: I didn't meant to belittle you like that, That made it romantic forgiveness.


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Review of Kapitola 9  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
okay so I looked up your story on google and Here is the English version:
Back in the room on the third floor , I really noticed that not everything was as I seemed to prvypohlad . But it was still Tommy , who waited Boss ? I'm going to pretend as if nothing had happened , and feel free to sit down beside the corpse Pending as they appear to me so finally say that we are f***ing assholes for it that we split up ? I just decided to do , it is in my opinion always better than sitting on your butt and chase a bird. He should have it boast that I am of Tony , whether as an ox AT ALL caught , it is nevertheless an important one way or another . No, he has it zbuzeruje as their bitch , but wait a Cat Sciences and the pride you once . " Henry you moron naspat need you down here, " he shouted Cat . " Yes , clearly the boss , now I'm there ." Back I came into the room but it was empty . " Here I am , help me transfer it to the basement ." Came from the hallway . Cat trying to move the body through the entire floor but his thin arms he 's obviously not allowed . Although he 'd laugh if it were not too irritation all the time. " Not a word ! " said the Cat . "Please ? Did not say anything . " " But I have ! " Kat replied . Shiver me from the back, what the hell has this mean ? ! " Do not stare and grab his legs , and guess what, the head, the harder it is ." Of course . What are you even so I pull into the basement , beside there we have all our accessories with maps and plans . But again, it finally Kat will have to kill , he would not let anyone untrained run around outside with information about us , so me and so did not mind . In the basement , I tied him on the hydrant , so that had to happen . He was still unconscious and bandage his already heavily soaked . "I wake him up ? " I asked . "If it makes you happy ... " . At the moment I drove his right fist on the cheek . From his nose began shockingly sprayed blood , I had him about to break . " We accept the " . " Give it time " said the Cat. I gave him another one , this time a left . To my surprise he now blood from the nose ceased to flow , I gave it to him again about the place . Cat will notice and hoarse laugh for a second . " Still nothing " I said . "I think he's dead or what ." " I'm alive . Motherf***er " said suddenly . " I'll give you motherf***er mangy dog" . I just gave him one for solar . Cat suddenly change the tone of the nervous quiet and incredibly uchylne said . " Henry , Henry tranquility. Nas guest deserves warm welcome so do not behave like a caveman and there are characters in schism ." I stood in a corner so that I still had a good view of what is happening . Cat began to tell .
" I would welcome if we are first introduced , what do you say ? Called me Kat , that you will have to do . And as they call you ? "
"I am an A - Anthony . "
"I am delighted Anthony , surely interest you , where you now , however, Anthony ? "
" Where am I ? "
" Oo good question Anthony , already our shared four floors of the two corpses , you know something about Anthony ? "
" No. "
" Anthony , Anthony , You got one shot to give me the correct answer or are afraid of losing and I let you go Herryho " he pointed at me . " Herryho will recognize , this time beside you you must already be a mate" " It is not true Henry ? "
" I can see this motherf***er finally killed ? " I replied .
" Anthony , Anthony , I see that you are kamaratov nevies right, it is very wrong, very, very . Especially here when there run around and kill people , you have no one to help you then . Anthony , let me be your friend , let me help you. And I really want to help , just need to to be honest with me . " Ended melancholy . "So what do dame Just one last attempt ? " After a while he said enthusiastically .
" I'm sorry . Cat . Did not like to be impolite . Yeah, I know about them . "
" COMMITTEE, Anthony finally gets somewhere . "
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