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Review of Stolen Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That's a very dark poem. Write more! This was very much Edgar-Allen-Poeish.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good look on the modern workaholic society, "smelling the roses" as I imagine, would be very hard.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem has a good rythmn. Just capitalize and puntuate the sentences. This really was good. The best thing while writing a poem is to read it out loud and hear how it sounds to you.
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