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Review of What is by Itself  Open in new Window.
Review by Mermaid 10 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very interesting setup. I am not sure how much of this you actually believe and how much is fiction but, it was nice to read. Your word choices stood out to me and I appreciated this. Your words flow well together and I can picture it in my head. Keep up the great work!
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Review by Mermaid 10 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
It's good so far but... Where's the rest?! Anyway nice job and check out my stories and add a chapter if you want. One of them might just be right up your ally if you like stories with amnesia. ;) thanks!
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Review of Johnny  Open in new Window.
Review by Mermaid 10 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice! Make a sequel! I love where this is going!
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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
Review by Mermaid 10 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice job! I liked how your wrote it. You should write a sequel to this because I feel there is still more to figure out about what happened to Becky and Johnny. Plus, is the
un house really haunted or, was someone behind it all? Maybe Kevin can go back and find out what really happened or something. Anyway I liked it over all!

By the way, check out my my stories and maybe even add a chapter or give me some pointers. I'm new so I only have a few. Thanks!
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Review by Mermaid 10 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hey, this was a fun and interesting poll, nice job!
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