This is very interesting and useful. I'm glad you made something like this that I think a lot of people can benefit from.
The Bad
There's just some awkward grammar issues.
Suggestions/Corrections
I'm not going to address every grammar issue but I think you'll get the gist.
Activities that are usually carried out outside the home to relieve fatigue must also be stopped and it is recommended to do #stayathome.
The 'do' isn't necessary and makes the phrasing a bit awkward.
about a new virus affecting the economy, education, society and an unexpected future.
I think something like this would work better: about a new virus' effect on the economy, education, and society, as well as a now unpredictable future.
Overall
This is a very useful tool. It could use some touch up with sentence structure and grammar issues but other than that I really liked it.
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