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Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Really very good- I love it. What I do have to make a little frown at the slight racial displeasure hidden within its silky depths. But otherwise, a fantastic and moving pieve.
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Review of A Moment Together  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ooooh, sensual! Very well done, you really convey your passion. I love the image of stars at the end- the power and heat of love, shining out... brilliant!!!
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Review of Frozen Flames  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow... really stirring! You are really emotive in this short poem; it's great! The extended metaphor, this contrasting hot-and cold image, is incredibly cleverly used. You are creative and invertive with it, and really show your feelings! Every stanza holds the theme, and reitorates the idea- your conflicting, painful experience. The subject may have hurt you, but it inspired one hell of a poem!
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Review of Interactive Art  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Brilliant! Quick, snappy, creepy! I love it! An endless cycle... Well done!
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Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Woah , really powerful! Made me think: next time I'm at a weddin, must I hold my peace? Is this what's best for the people? Strong. The first stanza is jarring; catches you like a barb. I am guessing you have had a strong experience of this in your past? Or is it a fear? It made me think, so thank you.
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Review of The Literarian  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
wow: that's amazing! Just climbed into my head and took it by command. Deeply stirring, really makes you think about yourself. Matt's long struggle really, in some way, echoes our own, does it not? So often I can feel like this! The return to the top was really clever; highlighting the lack of escape, the eternal cycle: brilliant!
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Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great! I love this! Really touches you...
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Review of The Tyrannosaurus  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Quite good. A tad too intelligent for my liking, I don't see it fitting with the dinosaur persona. But maybe this is a good thing, putting added intelegence in... Shall ponder your tale, but for now... I like it.
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Review of Cherish  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so strong, really magnificent! I found it very heart-hitting, it pulls at emotions, and that is a true writer's craftsmanship.
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Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's really good hearing about how writing sits in peoples lives, and you seem to have had a very interesting time! I love the ending, nice ongoing metaphor, with the brilliant little flick at the end!
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Review of We Both Love  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great- your passion is bursting at the seems and you can feel it bursting out here. I hope you stay happy and "passionate, joyful, and true"
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Review of SEASON'S CHANGE  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
You can really feel your faith and love pouring through in this poem- fantastic!
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Review of Self-Betrayal  Open in new Window.
Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Fantastic poem! This is beautifully written, and wonderfully dark. I love it!
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Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Brilliant. I'm detecting Orwellian influences here. A few technical errors, but, errors schmerrors :P
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Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
random!! what the hey, have threestars, it made me laugh, somewhat.
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Review by White Noise Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Brilliant. A few little errors, but, in the words of that Apple guy; No-one's perfect. Shall give you a run over anything i think might run a little smoother later. But I actually really enjoyed this!
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