Well written and I could tell you was in pain when you wrote it. I could also tell that you felt like no one would care either. Great job and keep writing
Well said and nicely put alot of us feels this way about the health care system in our country. It sucks especially when their are us who needs it but cant get it. I love America but the health care system sucks. Rock on and keep writing
Good poem well written and I could feel your pain. I could tell you wrote this with your heart. I hope that you will finally be with the one you was talking about in your poem. Keep writing
Awwwwwwwwww this was cute and well written. A perfect poem of describing how a bird feels and acts when they are depressed. I felt as though the lines could have been seperated and put into stanzas. Keep writing
Wow this was so sad. I could feel your pain of loosing someone that you was close to and I liked how the neighbors lined up as they waited for the coffin to drive past. Keep writing my friend
This was well said although I feel as if putting puncuation in the right places would make it better. I also feel as if capitilizing the words that need it would too. Just some suggestions. Keep writing
Great job and I could tell you wrote it for admiroration of your friend that you met unexpetedly that day as you drunk your coffee out on your porch. Keep writing
Wow great poem and i could feel the pain as you wrote. Domestic abuse is hard to write about and is very difficult to write about as well. Great job. Keep writing.
Great job this poem was well written and very descriptive I could see everything and after reading it twice I could understand it. You was saying to be aware of your surrondings and people do things differently. Keep writing.
Good job but I felt as though you did not put your heart into this. It seemed rushed and hurriedly typed so that you would have something to submit. Keep writing
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