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Review of I'm Hungry!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I suggest that you read over your work before sending, to make sure that it is worded okay. But besides that, I like the expression of how you are feeling at that moment.
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Review of Question Mark?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, I can relate to this because I many time say those words in my head. It is like you have a war with yourself because all the things that you have been dealing with keeps playing over and over in your mind and you want it to stop. But sometimes it is hard because something triggers it. I can relate. Thank You for sharing. Good Job!!
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Review of BEAR DANCE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a cute children's poem about a bear. Which is nice. Maybe a little more could have been added. Besides that it is sounds good.
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Review of End of Days  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This sounds beautiful. You really show how you appreciate the special moments with your mate. How each day you enjoy being with them. I love it!! Thank you
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Review of Love's Touch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This author is showing how she misses the love that she had with her mate. Which is beautiful because it showes that the love that they shared will not be forgotten. I love it!!!
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Review of Double Trouble  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem about their pets . This is nice. It shows that they are pet lovers and loves their dogs.
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