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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
The story has a wonderful plot and pulls you right into the room with Isabel and Chloe. The detail is wonderful. I could almost feel, smell and taste what it was like.
There were a few grammatical errors and the story seemed unfinished. I would love to read more about these rest of the day for these women. Overall,great job.
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