Hi! first of all nice meeting you, and reading your lovely poem. There's a lot of things that love can do for us and one is expressing it through poetry. According to Plato's words, "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." I think you can still do more having an inspiration with you.
Hi nice meeting and reading your lovely work. Wow! it's like a new genre of a fantasy literary work, a modern frog prince, or sleeping handsome who needs a true love's kiss. when I was reading this, I remember the movie Hellboy, who is a good devil. I feel that you still have a lot of things to say here. Continue the good work!
Nice story. Gay and lesbian literature has been an emerging field in creative writing at present. Being gay still encompasses a lot of definitions, as Gender identity has still to be defined. Environmental factor is still a big factor, in which the plot usually evolves in an all-boys school, and i think admiring someone with the same sex is not an issue.
First of all nice meeting and reading your poem. And I admired your optimism that despite your condition, you use what you have to inspire and makeother people laugh. I once read before that it would be better to your condition to read more and write. Write and write more, I really love this poem. Lookign forward for your other articles.
One of my interests aside from writing is dancing, and i'm glad that dancing can also be put into writing. Although some of your lines are vague, in which some are not related to each other. But at the end, you're still on the track of about doing everything just to have that goal of dancing with your special someone, Continue the good work, and i believe you could still do a lot.
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