I love this. You caught the comedy of 'Weather Control' forecasters. (obviously tried to do same in 'Helga') And the true drama of impending 'canes - using -great- character's POV - in charge of helpless people.
Makes me a little shamed in my fluffy piece - but, um, well, it was before Katrina. Being silly as per usual.
Returning editing favor - maybe.
+ When Maggie the cook is speaking to Rachel: "...orderin' a little extra every week, ___'pecially" you meant 'specially? ; )
Not sure you meant, in last paragraph, "At least ____I (it?) didn't get any massive limbs..."
Really liked this - only other hurricane story I've read. Really gets the (good) details. Thanks for the read!
Moo-velous! I loved this. Brand new here - so great to see the like 'nurtsy-minded'.
If I'd been earlier, wanted to add the celebrity inspired faction of Wal-Mart employees understandably protesting and refusing to sell any leather goods - sneakers and the like.
It's over the moon, this one - great going.
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