Overall not bad, however, I found many of the lyrics to be somewhat cryptic and a bit difficult to follow. I think that a little clarity regarding some of the content would make for an easier readability experience from the readers perspective. You did have great. Use of symbolism though, I liked the metaphors used.
I felt this was a nice little poem, and it evoked happy, tranquil emotions while I read it. It is a bit short for my taste, but that's just my personal preferance.
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