I find this very amazing, it has something to it, I know what you're saying about it being there though it sounds crazy. I don't think you're a bad writer at all. This is so creative and different. Only the most amazing people come up with stuff like this. It's kind of like other things in our lives. We stumble across them and never stop Pondering. Keep writing Kat, I'm listening.
This is quite beautiful, hard to grasp at the same time, you need to take a moment for realizing and feeling what is to be said. At the same time it left me confused in ways but that's ok, I love this. It takes a bit getting used to though, at the start it seems more as a poetic flow, which is a nice one but then turns more into a short story with plain spoken words. I haven't seen many people do this but I think I like it. You did a fine job capturing something wobbly and unstable in the world. But so solid and warm. It registers to me the broken ways we humans now hold. But it shows us the love and compassion we will forever hold. Well done.
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