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Review of We, the Fallen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love it! It has great rhythm and the words flow together perfectly. You have a way with words for sure. I like the last stanza the best.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Simple and well done. I would recommend you continue to expand the poem. You really caught my attention with the first line and the repetition at the end was a nice touch! A great topic as well, one that is hard to write about, but you executed it magnificently with few words. A great job at capturing emotions.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is some powerful stuff! I love how you portray the raw emotion. Lots of good imagery. Keep it up!
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