The story of the blind girl does not inspire to lead great lives ,but it propagates superstition and blind faith.The real awakening will be vision and not the belief in miracles.This story could be a an evangelists bread and butter but in this creative forum it is just crumbs.
The less we notice grammatical errors would make it readable.Although the good part is that it is very short and we do not have to read more of it
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