Very good short story. Like the length, characters, and plot. Could be indented and paragraphed better. Spelling and punctuation superb. Keep up good writing.
Great! I didn't expect such a short story to have such great characterization. I feel like i'm there with the characters. A great start in good writing. Keep it up.
Inspirational, though I don't entirely agree. Anyway, seem a good length for subject matter. Spelling and punctuation excellent. good use of italics. It helps to have someone who really knows something about writing to write such a good article. Gives me much to think about.
Very good work. I like the rhyme and rithum. I can't give any tips on how to write better. I like the picture that goes with it. I know very little about Nove Otto. Thanks for explanation of form. Helps reader understand work better. Talented poets are rare these days.
This is a very good story. The characters are excellent. Characters in a story are more important than the plot. Just the right amount of dialogue. Good ending.
Perfecto! Couldn't have written a better chapter myself, and I really thought I could! Keep up the good work. I really liked the new character you added in this chapter. Thanx.
A great essay. Reminds me of my parents marriage. Except that they were older when they met. They, too, were married 11 1/2 years, ending tragically with my father's death in April 1981. They, too, were always happy in their marriage, unlike many other couples. It truly was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.
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