Ah, this was just the type of story I was hoping to find here at the Catacombs today. Wonderfully whimsical, perhaps almost a shade of sadism within as well. The end had me larfing out loud. My style of humour. Bravo!!
An excellent read, though I think that, considering the profanity, it should have been rated an 18+ story. Also, more spacing between paragraphs would have made it easier to read. All in all, though, fine prose, and I enjoyed it. Sort of reminded me of a passage of a Huxley story; good stuff.
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