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Review by Katherine Storm Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi! Oxer123 here to review. Good poem. It flows smoothly, and I loved the word choice. Not too chunked up with big words.
The only parts that didn't flow as well was the last line of the second stanza and the 3rd stanza. I was getting used to the whole "maybe " thing and then it goes to something else and I'm like, "What just happened?!!" Maybe try to tie that in with the rest of it.
Overall, great work!

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