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Review by Jude Lame Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A start to be sure. Some spelling and grammatical mistakes make parts a little hard to understand. Some more detail would be nice with less run on dialogue. If you really have created a different universe then you should continue to write it. Please alert me if you decide to upload more I would like to read it.
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