Beautiful. The story is well written and emotions are aptly expressed. I could feel the love between Emily and Joe. It takes true love & a lot of courage to sacrifice your happiness for someone else's happiness and to be able to forgive and hold on like Joe did. We need a lot more love like that in the world today and i hope i get someone to love me that much. I really love this story and im definitely adding the author to my favourite authors list.
A good story. It has a visible plot and well developed characters and nice storyline. I however feel the writer has to improve on his writing. The expressions and word flows fell somehow flat and leaves the reader unconnected to the story. It didnt grip the emotions. All the same, i praise the writer for imagination and creativity.
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