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Review of With Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a good story, short wasn't good way to describe it... She was in love an never notice it, This has a lot info and can be used a study into the mind of the motional women of today again age.

Well at least now she has a ghost Boyfriend, whom can now watcher forever!
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Review of Shrunk at Walmart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Okay I love this, it was funny and like how both characters ended up in different trap in the stories. Shame there not more, but it was funny. Also you could have made them be trap in the store more.

Also a lot people get size wrong a inch is shorter than pinky on some people
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think this story has a great start, If you have a magic or a caste system; it would be cool if you dive into it. Also if the goddess warn them about the child, does that mean she wants it happen.

I'm little into the story, I hope you have a great day.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Okay I read a lot of the chapters and this interactive and it all starts good and fun. I will say the biggest story just got bad, if that person wants; to tale dead end world story that's on them. You can see it come, The smaller stories are fun, also you can't add to those big world line.

That just how I feel... Have good day..
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This story might be long but most of chapters are trash or just one line. For free or unregister this story is a Past, with how site work I wouldn't tell anyone to read it.

The Story could have better with longer chapters and more of the Naruto world... Sorry..
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This Naruko is wild, I not shock at how wild she is, but I'm shock at how fast he going at turn everyone.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I remember this story it was on FF.net and on few other page... I do wonder if this will be as long as your other stories, Also how many chapter can people add.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed it, at the end... I was sure the father going sale the daughter for food or to wed her to some asshole.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this did a really good job, on telling the rules. I think
the coins, = rate is a little big but the info is good.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This Story is good, it would be funny is she got herself knock up, than Chloe could laugh about being her own mom/dad to her daughter in the future.
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