Thanks for posting this, I really enjoyed it. I bet it took some work to get it all in Iambic Pentameter, especially because it flows so well. The imagery in this poem is simply breathtaking. It's such a perfect time to write about Spring right now.
Keep On man,
-Oliver
I typically like poems that are a little more lengthy, but that's just my personal preference. However, I enjoyed this poem quite a bit and think the brevity contributes to it beneficially.
I could pick out a couple lines that I think are the best, but really, the whole thing is good! Love the imagery in it; sets almost a comical image!
Keep On!!
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