Wow! I didn't expect that. My first impression was that of a native American poem. I guess I got that from the two letter words I was told to repeat. "repeat what you fear most...me...me...me." Fabulous!
I loved the way you built the suspense. I love the way you repeated part of the word, although I didn't know that was what you were doing. I really can't offer any way to make this more perfect. I love it.
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