very sophisticated piece. It is full of frutiful words that are related to what you are writing about. It is really different. I love this part or your writing, "I often make note of the interesting names I meet, stowing them away for (hopefully) future babies. She was dressed in the pale blue gown she had been buried in, which made me wonder what had happened to my wrestling fan’s clothes. She joined him on the sofa and there they sit, in silence, in stillness." It made me go wow...good job
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