"Chapter 51: Magnitude" by Bask25456 seems well thought-out and very engaging, it was almost like I was reading a segment from The Freedom Writers, or listening to one of the accounts of the Holocaust in a museum; it must be hard for the students in Three Races that try to see Humans as equals like Mark and Molly would, despite the policies enforced on this world of titanic carnivores, and must be even harder for Keane hearing about this having been going on for years on end. Bask25456 seems to be well-versed in telling a complex storied account of this (if you pardon the phrase) magnitude in just a single chapter of an otherwise thus-far good and compelling storyline as this already is now. I will only rate this item as a 4.0 due to several and minor problems with capitalization.
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